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Your Salesletter ►►► Cash-Spitting Machine...
...After You Add The
Easy-To-Implement Power-Tactics You Discover With My SalesLetter
Critiques...
(see
below for the benefits others have gotten...!)
First, let me explain why you get this screaming bargain:
It's
Robert Plank's fault...
You see, some weeks back, a copy critique I did --
unbeknownst to me -- fell into Robert's hands.
And I unexpectedly
got an email from him...
Here's what php/javascript programmer extraordinaire wrote:
(reprinted with permission):
quote
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Those
are some killer tips you gave him...
heck, you should run some copy critique WSOs...
So,
I am!
I Am Offering
Great Copy Critiques!
...for a limited time...
Actually, back in June I did a copy critique on a private forum
and here are some of the comments I got:
quote
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"You rock!
That was a great reply."
-- debbieb
quote
:
Some great tidbits in there.
I sent an email once and Judy gave me a handful of lessons in her reply.
I tried to reply with a "I know what I'm doing type of reply" but in
reality,
It was a big "ahhhhh stupid me" moment!
She knows her stuff.
-- Noah Fleming, http://www.rich-jerks.com
Oh...and how was the owner able to benefit? Here's what he had to
say:
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Interestingly I changed tone of the split test headers
2 hours ago and already got a sale.
Note: he re-wrote the headline based on my comments.
Okay -- so what do some other folks say?
Well, here's a clip from an email I received on 9/22/2008:
thanks
judy I've sold 2 now since all those changes
quote
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"Judy Kettenhofen, NextDay-Copy,
suggested just one change that
helped me write a letter that is
converting nearly 1 new client for
every 10 visitors to my salespage.
That's ten percent conversions!
This has been tested with thousands
of visitors over months of time and
always converts the same!
I and my company have made several
thousands of dollars in just days
from that salespage and many more in just
the last couple of months with nearly 80%
of new clients making
multiple purchases,
returning to buy again and referring
their friends to order too!
Needless to say,
I whole-heartedly recommend her
services to any business owner and/or
individual looking to
maximize your return
on investment
with expert marketing insights that comes from experience.
On behalf of my company and myself...
Thank You, Judy and NextDay-Copy!"
Doug Barger
http://CustomMinisiteGraphics.com] www.CustomMinisiteGraphics.com
Or, how about ...
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or...
quote
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Judy has the unique, rare and extremely valuable knack of putting her
finger on the exact thing that's 'wrong' with your
copy - and then tweaking it ever so gently, yet turning it into an amazingly
effective piece of persuasive writing!
I've benefited from her advice and critique - and anyone who relies on
copy that works will too.
Dr.Mani Sivasubramanian
(Dr. Mani, the heart surgeon and internet marketer)
or...
quote
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"WOW Judy!
All of your points are true GEMS !
... Judy really OVER DELIVERED ... the depth and detail that she
provided was AMAZING !
If
I knew that I were going to get this quality of information ahead of
time I would have paid at least $200 ... even though I believe the
pointers I received are Priceless and I am sure they will assist me in
achieving my goals.
Judy asked me in the email ...
"Does this help?" and the only thing I could say along with many
superlatives is ... THIS is of tremendous VALUE & help ! "
-- Rob 'diggorati' Gat,
http://www.ultra-bum-marketing.com
quote
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I
contacted Judy recently about a problem I was having with one of my
sales letters. I was amazed at the detailed nature of her reply, she
addressed every problem I had and identified a number that I wasn't
aware of.
Her in depth knowledge and commonsense makes Judy
the "Go To" person If you want to increase your profitability and
conversion rates.
You can see more testimonials on my site at
http://www.NextDay-Copy.com ...
So you may be asking yourself....
"How much
to
turn my SalesLetter Into A Cash-Spitting Machine?"
Well, first, let's look at your options...
- A
new salesletter could cost you (for a decent, full-length salesletter
-- $500 would be a bargain, $1000 or more is what you need for quality
work.
- Same with a re-write --
easily set you back $500.
- And critiques are going for a
minimum of $127 in the WSO forum. When you can find them.
- Or
you can miss out on those extra sales and profits (and who doesn't need
those in these days of increasing gas prices, food prices, and more?)...
Before
I tell you the price, first, ask yourself...how much would you benefit
from 1 extra sale (not even 1 extra sale a day, just 1 extra sale?)
What about 2?
At the going rate of most products, you can re-coup your investment
quickly with just a few additional sales...because
Here's
the offer:
Copy critique -- turn $77 into multiple sales -- making your pocket
and, if you have thm, your affiliates, much happier!
(Well, after you apply the principles of the critique.)
Get
Your Critique Now, While They Last!
You benefit from...
- My years of hard work...and
from my study with the likes of John Carlton, Michel Fortin, and Harlan
Kilstein...
- The
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sign a letter promising I would not divulge! (Secrets that cost me
$5000 -- yes, I'm serious about this stuff...)
- My
background in hypnosis and neurolinguistic programming (NLP -- yes, I
have been studying this since 1982 and have both practitioner &
master practitioner certifications)
Get
Your Amazing Copy Critique Now, While They Last!
In short, 10s of thousands of dollars of training with top experts...
In
addition to the critique, if you decide that you want further copy, the
critique amount would be applied to the subsequent work.
That's the offer...
Get
Your Amazing Copy Critique Now, While They Last!
Since... I'd rather spend time on your copy so I'm not go on and on
here. There could be a bonus here and there.
In fact, for the first 5, I will give you a copy of the nearly 1000
word copy critique from the June critique.
Depending upon workload, I may choose to close this offer at any
time.
You will benefit if you make the changes I suggest. I
guarantee it. People have made the changes I suggested --
even fairly "simple" changes -- and seen results almost immediately
(did you see them, above?)
What do you have to
lose?
It's hard to come by a better deal for information that will improve
your sales and copy.
So this is a screaming bargain.
For a limited time, for a lucky few: $77 for a copy critique.
Sure, you can pay for a salesletter to be written, or to be
re-written...but at what cost?
Why spend hundreds or thousands to get results you might easily get
with a Copy Critique?
Why not get started making additional sales today? Just click here
to get started:
Get
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I'd hate to see you miss out.
Thanks for taking the time to read my offer. I'm sure you can benefit.
Isn't this just what your salesletter needs?
Judy Kettenhofen
Get
Your Amazing Copy Critique Now, While They Last!
[x] Yes, you can order more than 1 You can order 2, 3 or even more!
[x] Yes, I give discounts for large quantities, of course!
[x] Yes, you can order now to use in the future!
[x] Yes, you will receive a quick turn-around, within 24-48 hours
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zerofill
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USA
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
08:51:17
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Judy is the real
deal...She gave me some ideas I would never have thought of for an
opt-in page.
So I am sitting there going yeah yeah...I will try what you are saying.
(not expecting much of a change)
My problem was these people weren't verifying their emails.
She tells me what to write and guess what?
I
am glad I didn't bet here because the next 22 people instantly verified
their emails. Plus never had a problem after the changes again...I am
sitting there going what the hell? LOL
She knows how to reach
people on a level I don't comprehend. So make no mistake...if you want
to increase sales, or opt-ins...you better take this offer while you
can at this price!
Since that original issue I had...she has
helped me numerous times and it has always made a HUGE difference! [The
Price] for what you will get from her is insanely cheap! You can't put
a price
on the massive ROI that I know you will see!
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Steven
Schwartzman
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USA
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
09:33:17
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Judy recently did a
critique for me and her insight was absolutely incredible.
I
was writing copy for a client and wanted another copywriter's
opinion...I was shocked at how many great ideas and strategies Judy
shared with me. It really made the copy I was writing 500 times better.
For the price and quality of Judy's critiques, this could be one of the
best WSO's I've seen in a very long time.
By the way, did the critique end up in Robert's hands cause of me?
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zapseo
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
09:41:55
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Wow, thanks, Steven!
:blush:
I'm honored to get that kind of feedback from another copywriter :)
Live JoyFully!
Judy
PS -- while I told Don I was posting my WSO, I hadn't told Steven, so
his
post
was a complete surprise to me! While Don had offered to post after I
created the WSO -- I'd completely forgotten about telling you how to
get people to verify their opt-ins! :) Thanks, Don! |
For a limited time and limited
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
09:47:31
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FYI:
The critique I gave Steven I did on the copy alone.
I took the copy and uploaded it to Google docs.
If you aren't familiar with Google docs, check it out.
With Google docs, you can go in -- as I did, with Steven's --and add
comments.
Personally, I know video critiques are hot right now -- but you ever
notice
you have to TAKE NOTES?
Why bother with that? Save yourself the time & effort by having
the comments
right next to the copy in question! |
For a limited time and limited
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Coach Cheese
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
16:02:57
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Oh yah, this is a
no-brainer.
I
pay Judy to write lots of web copy for me on an important "ghost"
website for financial advisors, to get visitors to call the advisor or
give their contact info.
When she doesn't have time as soon as I
need her to write for me, she's kind enough to take time out anyway to
critique my headlines and copy "slant".
A word here, a twist there -- I'm then able to take her comments and
implement in seconds to improve my copy immediately.
$77
is nothing compared to the value you will get. She's the best
copywriting secret out there. Unless you just can't drive traffic to
your site, if you make less than 100 times return on your money, I'd be
shocked.
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Steven Fullman
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Posted - 07/30/2008 :
18:43:30
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An honest review
from my side of the fence.
Judy is up there with Fortin, Halbert, and Kennedy...
IMHO. Yes, It's an opinion, but isn't THAT what's
gonna
make you decide?
Biased? You betcha. Judy took my copy...and tore the
crap out of it. And rightly so. It stunk.
Judy fixed it.
...but she did more, she gave me a new offer, a new
angle, and a killer approach.
At $77, this really is a
slap-upside-the-head no brainer...
I once paid $397 for Judy's advice. It was the best decision
I ever made.
Steve
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Coach Cheese
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Posted - 08/01/2008 :
16:43:57
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Hey Judy,
I
just bought. I have put a sales letter up on google docs and sent it to
you for some tips for my "lesser" but decent copywriter (he puts out my
"fast" stuff).
I'm sure you'll help him out.
I love this
idea! I use you for my weightier projects, and hire you cheaply to
critique my less experienced copy guy. Quite cost effective for smaller
projects. I" sure I'll get my money back within the first hour.
Thanks!
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Posted - 08/01/2008 :
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That is a total
major blush, Steven.
I wouldn't even begin to compare myself to those folks -- even
if just simply from a mileage point of view.
All three of those gentlemen -- whose skills I respect highly -- have
put out a lot more copy for a lot longer than I have. :)
<< Think I should charge Steven 5 figs next time? :)
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You should check out Steven's wso. (check out the people who have
commented on it, too!) The WSO will provide you with a great checklist
on, not just videos, but on marketing, in general.
The video he discusses is worth watching on its own, just from a
consumer protection point of view. (BTW, I once wanted to discuss that
video on the WF, but brought it up with one of the moderators, who
thought the content might cause, in his words, "devilment.")
Still have a few places left...!
Thanks again for stopping by!
Live JoyFully!
Judy Kettenhofen,Profit Strategist/Copywriter
NextDay Copy |
For a limited time and limited
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Amazing Copy Critiques WSO! |
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